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Your Plan B
Contributed by
djs
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 03:50:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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as you lie in your bed
peacefully dreaming of him
i sit here awake
thinking of you again
flashes of brilliance
display what could be
yet i remain distant
unable to pursue this dream
times when we're alone
the world stands still
and in that moment
i understand that love is real
the faintest echo of your laughter
and the slighest touch of your hand
are all i need
to help me understand
that i'd give you the world
if you'd give me the chance
but you're in love with him
so i never ask
friends with unused potential
is where we shall stay
i'm here when you need me
i always obey
at night when you're lonely
when he's not around
dial my number
drag me down
you say it's just bad timing
i guess we shall see
but until that moment
i'm stuck here waiting
sincerely, your Plan B
- djs (12/23/08)
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Re: Your Plan B
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by elle on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 10:21:49 AM AEST
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| modest, forthright & endearing as you are enduring. . . good write. peace elle |
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Re: Your Plan B
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 01:05:50 PM AEST
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your plan B, a very powerful and poignant ending summing up the whole angst of the poem. powerful writing, quality poem.
-phil |
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Re: Your Plan B
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by SilverRain on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 04:37:52 PM AEST
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| Very interesting and beautifully written piece. Well done. |
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