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Rescue Me!
Contributed by
ginabelle
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 01:57:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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CAN'T SEEM TO COMPREHEND, UNDERSTAND
WHY NO MAN SEES THE TRUE BEAUTY IN ME.
CHOOSING TO SEE ONLY THE WORST,
NOT EVEN LOOKING AT THE CURSE BESTOWED UPON ME.
THEY DON'T KNOW WHAT I'VE BEEN THROUGH
OR THE WRONG PATHS I'VE TAKEN,
CLEARLY MISTAKIN ME FOR SOME EASY VICTIM
TRAPPED INSIDE ME ARE SO MANY THINGS,
INKLINGS TO THE SECRETS DEEP WITHIN ME
NO ONE ELSE WILL EVER SEE.
MY EYES BURN FROM THE TEARS
THE TEARS CAUSED BY MY FEARS
MY FEARS GRAB AT EVERY DREAM
EVERY DREAM STAYS A FANTASY.
I FEEL LIKE IM DROWNING AT SEA
WISHING, HOPING, PRAYING FOR SOMEONE TO
RESCUE ME!
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ginabelle
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2008-12-23 01:57:37]
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Re: Rescue Me!
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by djs on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 03:54:32 AM AEST
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MY EYES BURN FROM THE TEARS
THE TEARS CAUSED BY MY FEARS
MY FEARS GRAB AT EVERY DREAM
EVERY DREAM STAYS A FANTASY...
such great words, very, very powerful. great job. |
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Re: Rescue Me!
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by mariahneu1 on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 10:24:07 AM AEST
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| Oh, I loved your word choice and attitude. You got your point across indefinitely and I loved it. =] |
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Re: Rescue Me!
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by elle on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 10:30:32 AM AEST
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| unpredictably powerful. . . reminding me to always look within. . . search within & you will find a miracle in yourself. peace. elle |
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Re: Rescue Me!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 01:02:41 PM AEST
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inspiring write. what you describe is all too common, unfortunately. keep up the good work.
-phil |
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