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SUICIDE NOTES.
Contributed by
Incognito_Bombastus
on
Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 05:43:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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SUICIDE NOTES.
I sit in this world surrounded
By beauty & pain
In natural & human condition,
Understanding,
Oblivious to why
Knowing nothing joining hands
With the universe,
Making love to myself,
The sun, the music, the universe &
Cry to myself, for myself in the
Fraternity of impulse & futility
Of struggling graces.
How can I reach you, understand you
& have you understand me?
I loathe those questioning, inquisitioning faces.
I find peace with strangers, I find rest in solitude
& talk interrogation. Your concepts are a mystery
To me & my tumult in dealing with them & you,
Are the ripples of your shallow tides false as
The soul in cadaverous eyes?
Can you only see the lite
Torches to inquire?
Do you not know or can you
Not feel the warmth burning in the fire?
I’m evil & must be stopped.
You’re all too weak,
I’m the only man for the job.
Copyright ©
Incognito_Bombastus
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2008-12-22 17:43:16]
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Re: SUICIDE NOTES.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 06:54:57 PM AEST
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a good write i.b., i would say that you went over the top in the 2nd stanza, but like i said, your imagination is incredible and difficuult to control. the rest was perfect though, keep up the good work.
-phil |
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Re: SUICIDE NOTES.
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by amber_vonHorror on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 08:20:05 AM AEST
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tha twas truly beautiful
thankyou for sharing your gift. |
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Re: SUICIDE NOTES.
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by elle on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 12:27:11 PM AEST
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| sir, a provocative & eclisping marquee. an original derogation of existence. I love your subtle deployment of lifes' appreciation coinciding with innuendo of machination. the last stanza expounds a stronghold of will & self-determination, culminating all effort towards finality & your escape velocity. . . magnificent en'voi. . . bravisimo. . . peace & blessing. elle |
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