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Cheating-His Story
Contributed by
lnnie
on
Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 10:48:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I know you are lonely
I see you twisting slowly
in that ill wind
unable really to resist
his soft words.
I see how you look at him
the times you've disappeared
your time unaccounted for.
I see it in your
new makeup
and dress
in the extra care
you take in the mirror.
I see changes in you
and know they
do not come from me.
I see her
because she is convenient
and asks little or nothing from me.
The sex is rough
wild at times
more about release
than tenderness.
I know you're cheating
and worse
know
I can't soften now;
the anger blocks
the things you need.
So I perch here
on this abyss
going
no where
compass-less
Copyright ©
lnnie
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2008-12-22 10:48:33]
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Re: Cheating-His Story
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 06:28:14 PM AEST
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after your explanation, it all makes sense. it is tragic really, a good write though, i would say.
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Re: Cheating-His Story
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by navydocny on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 12:50:34 PM AEST
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Glad I waited to comment...I was hoping for a follow-up...
You illustrate well both painful sides of the coin....both people are in pain, both searching whereas what they are searching for is already before them....
Beautifully written, and a tough subject.....
Take Care,
Steve |
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