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To His Own Insanity . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Sunday, 21st December 2008 @ 06:00:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Who
can prove
what life's
about?
when in we come
and then it's
out,
bestowed on us
without request
so
who can say?
they have
it
best.
One
of sheer
financial gain?
perhaps good health
and minus pain,
maybey dreamers
lost in flight
who live by day
and love
by
night.
Who
can prove
what life's
about?
if any proof at
all,
in our souls
we scream and shout
whilst in our hearts
we
fall.
Not
to mention
in our minds
that place
of constant
woe,
we
pour our drink
and draw the blinds
and off to sleep we
go.
If
we're lucky
we may die
but if not
we
dream,
even worse
we find out why
nothing's what it
seem's.
Who
can prove
what life's
about?
with all it's mystery,
sherlock holmes
with all his clout
would fail
horrendessly.
Life
with all it's evidence
placed before our eyes,
non the less
remains a mess
of made to order
lies.
The
jury's been convicted
defendants now go free,
the judge has been sequested
to his own
insanity.
Ben
myheartsvoice
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myheartsvoice
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2008-12-21 18:00:29]
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Re: To His Own Insanity . . . Ben
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by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 21st December 2008 @ 06:23:55 PM AEST
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great write liked the flow especially in the last stanza
hope to read more soon
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Re: To His Own Insanity . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 12:00:05 AM AEST
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Sorry for your loss.
Awesome writing as always.
Happy Holidays to you and Joan.
big huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: To His Own Insanity . . . Ben
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by karoody on
Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 05:07:29 PM AEST
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so heartbreaking...
your story has been told beautifully
huge hugs and blessings to you and yours
there are no perfect words in times
like these, but i truly pray for peace
in the hearts of all who are hurting right now
it is obvious this friend was deeply treasured
again~
best of my blessings
kara |
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