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To C__
Contributed by
Incognito_Bombastus
on
Sunday, 21st December 2008 @ 05:41:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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To C__
In the runes & the stars & the cards,
In the timbre & the metre and the rhyme,
Through the wheels of the Zodiac's great signs,
May lovers thoughts cross time and space
& lovers all be united in grace.
Let the stars hold all charms
& the horned moon as I write the night becalm.
I love you with the purest of hearts
A golden alchemy,
Untouched by human arts
& the acusing finger of the world's calumny.
Your so close I can touch you,
Though distance seperates us
Distance and time too, but let this
My pen upon the page caress
Slow as I touch your silk soft skin.
At your painted feline feet I begin
My minds eye falling upon your honey thigh.
My fingers grasp this pen as
My hands would grasp your hair,
& my heart stops beating when your
Eyes in mine I meet &
Bedazzled by your hypnotic jeweled gaze
To my full height I rise.
Your smile is my delight
As in my mind I hold you &
Kiss your red laughing lips light.
Copyright ©
Incognito_Bombastus
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2008-12-21 17:41:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: To C__
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 03:17:15 AM AEST (User
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your finest write. in this poem you didn't over-elaborate, you controlled your muse expertly. it was full of passion, lust, imagery, everything. the rhyme scheme was spot on as well. you are a master of this style, i.b, i would stick with it for now.
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