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The Sickness Falls all around
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Sunday, 21st December 2008 @ 03:07:08 PM in AEST
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This is for my dad he's sick now. I told him a month ago he was getting sick but not even he would listen
Sickness falling all around
And no one notices because they don't notice the sound
A sneeze is a warning shot
letting you know it's coming
A cough to let you know it's almost there
Then it's to late your heads hot
your in intensive care
wondering how you got there
Different sicknesses fall all around
and we think they make no sound
we would be wrong
because the simple fact has been all along
we've never listened
And for those who do
whether it be me or you
keep trying to make others see
that sickness fall all around you and me
Copyright ©
Voice of the Silent
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2008-12-21 15:07:08]
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Re: The Sickness Falls all around
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 21st December 2008 @ 06:59:42 PM AEST
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This poem is more than true, it is
so esential, sorry for your pain, a
lovely style of writting fused with a
most sincere display of benevolant
conviction . . .
thank you also for your read,
it's not my usual but i'm in
some unexpected pain over
the loss of a dear home town
friend who died with out my
knowing it untill recently, first
time, i've ever written under the
influence, guess there's a first
time 4 every thing as they say,
thanks again, deeply appreciated.
Ben . . .
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Re: The Sickness Falls all around
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 03:21:59 AM AEST
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an interesting write, stubborness is an age-old human disease it seems. people should not underestimate the power of male pride. it can be deadly.
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Re: The Sickness Falls all around
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 08:30:05 PM AEST
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wow, i hope he recovers okay
we never want to think
those warning signs
are ever that serious
a very enjoyable read
with so much truth
remember that your friends
are here listening
take care
smiles and hugs to you always
kara
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