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My Closest Friend
Contributed by
ICY-DRE
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Saturday, 20th December 2008 @ 09:43:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I gaze into the lonely night,
I yell "Forgive me and come back",
You come out to hold me tight.
I walk into the bright light,
I yell "I love you and i want you back",
You come out to hold me tight.
I look into your eyes and i see your sight,
I whisper "I'm lost in your eyes do you have a map",
You come out to hold me tight.
I walk onto the frozen ice,
I scream "Somebody help me" as the ice start to crack,
You come out to hold me tight.
I race my past and look at your smile,
I think "I'll always be with you" as i run the track,
You come out to hold me tight.
I look into your eyes and i roll the dice,
I whisper "Help me stop smoking crack",
You say "I'll do whatever i can to help you clean your life,
You come out to hold me tight.
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Re: My Closest Friend
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by shelby on
Saturday, 20th December 2008 @ 10:19:52 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC
well for a first post I would say a good job.
I hope this person is holding you tight now.
Merry Christmas
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Re: My Closest Friend
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by Butterflyperfect on
Saturday, 20th December 2008 @ 10:36:28 PM AEST
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When I posted my first poem I felt a little weird, but this one is nice. It is a great feeling to have someone that you can look to when times get tough. Keep Writing, I'd love to read more.
Happy Holidays!
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