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broken thoughts
Contributed by
Anon
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Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 03:16:49 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I don't know what it is
I slowly get depressed inside
I keep trying to repress the feelings I have
But every now and then I find myself contemplating
Suicide?
A perfect match but not for her
Translucent
Her eyes make me an empty ghost
Second place in a race against misery
but the blame lies only in impossible wants
...Needs?
Is failure finally an option?
Surrender my fake hope
or torture myself with the unreachable.
Time works against me in a blind race
to the ever darkening unknown
Lonely is soon to have a new meaning
just when I get close I am as far away as I ever could be
why am I tormented like this?
..why do I torment myself?
My wishes are my silent downfall
I am slowly dying from the inside
the poison in my blood
grows stronger every day
Death means nothing to me now
it is almost even welcomed
I embrace war so others stay
Let me fight so my brothers
can have their day
Copyright ©
Anon
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2008-12-19 03:16:49]
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Re: broken thoughts
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by snoopington on
Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 06:06:30 AM AEST
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great write vert emotional.....
all the best.........
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Re: broken thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 01:23:26 PM AEST
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yes, a very deep and emotional write. i've felt like that at times myself. not nice.
-phil |
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Re: broken thoughts
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 05:05:41 PM AEST
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I read your words and found my self here with this to say.....
I fell into depression once in my life, It's like a deep dark pit. suppose that's why it's called a fall.
Somehow we endure. Learn to climb out and back to reality and find the hope that remains for us all.
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