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just a thought

Contributed by derickkk on Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 04:25:15 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

For once a blank image comes to mind
no more tears,
fear
my life right in front of me
reflect on my former self
and what you see never seems to be
image of relaity
my past,
once again this torment,
haunting me forever
see things differently now
life's emotions,evolving
as time stops,
taking that extra step back and listen...
no more tears,
pain
suffering
hate
guilt
as if gods journey set in my hands.
as time progresses by,
i feel dead and frozen
for that one split second, time
clearing your head threw all the smoke
your emotions run wild
im running,
away from everything i care for
my heart bleeds so much
BLACK
no remorse,pain ,fear
i cant accept the fact of who i am
hating myself within always
and of course,
you cant take back the past
your sins, regret
that last image, feeling
the day your whole life changes
so cold, so COLD
its almost easy really

BUT YOU CANT CHANGE LIFE
cant take back just 5 minutes
im going to miss him so much
SO MUCH
but my life, so cruel infront of me
building me, training me
the WALL
the hearts soldier or demise
emotions
patience...
its really all i have left to offer
everything taken from me
A BLINK
i hate myself for seeing this
so much pain and lies
eventho its not my fault
i shall take the blam
blame myself for how it all ends
but...
i will not appologize
never
i would rahter suffer
this is what im accustomed to
but this time,
forcing me to change, CHANGE
everyone expects so much,
or mearly nothing at all
im loosing my sence of friends
let alone myself
are you ready?
lets go!
10% luck,
20% skill,
15% concentrated will
5% pleasure
50% pain
100% reason to remember the name
determination and will threw all ODDS
to never give up to that last...
changing for better or worse
my mind races
nightmares
the reason, logic
im not a perfect person
there are many things i wish i didnt do
but I WILL have my honor,
I WILL have my last words
just as my dad did
even if it kills me

Copyright © derickkk ... [ 2008-12-18 04:25:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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