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Drug Deal or Something Much More Sinister?

Contributed by amber_vonhorror on Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 01:37:27 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Her heart made a cocophony of noises
Each beat sounded different
Her hair hung delicately around her neck
And whipped against her face as she stood in the wind

Clouds blanketted the elusive sky
Hiding behind the creature, that kept her alive
Her hands trembled uncomfortably
She gripped them tighter. Hiding her nervousness
Like a secret cover

When you live this life, you cant show your true feelings"
Thats what her mother told her when she turned ten
So her face became a facade ever since then
He walked slowly over to her
She noticed his shifty gaze
Checking for any sign of another person
He never knew any other way

"You got the stuff" he said. His speech a little bit broken
She pulled out the tiny package.
His eyes. They yearned so hard for the feeling that he was about to recieve
He handed her the money. over $1000 a piece
He went to walk away
And now our girl turns bad
Every blood cell in her body pulsing around
And she shot him right in the head
Then layed her scarf down as a comfortable bed
It wasn't his fault.
She needed this more then anyone could give her.

Copyright © amber_vonhorror ... [ 2008-12-18 01:37:27]
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Re: Drug Deal or Something Much More Sinister? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 05:42:03 AM AEST
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oh dear, grisly end. i liked the poem though, i think you used some very good imagery and it rhymed and flowed well. great work.

-phil

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