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Opal Wray
Contributed by
undead_poet14
on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 07:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She walks down the endless hall
Her eyes a deep, somber, blue
Stained with tears of sorrow
Her heart is broken
Nothing left but an empty space
She is alone in life
With no one to love
Or to love her in return
Her detest for feelings and emotions
Flourishes with each day
She has been hurt too many times
Too many times to even keep count
She is beyond crying
Beyond feeling
Beyond pain
Betrayal is a natural occurrence
Sadness is her fuel for life
Anger burns the Joy within to nothing
It seems as though no one can save
Poor Opal Wray
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2003-03-21 19:25:00]
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Re: Opal Wray
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by ravenblack_phoenix on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 07:29:53 PM AEST
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| Awww, poor Opal Wray =( Maybe she needs chocolate, chocolate usually helps ^.^ heheh.... |
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Re: Opal Wray
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 09:50:01 PM AEST
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i agree chocolate helps alot. good write although very sad
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Re: Opal Wray
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 02:03:12 AM AEST
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I dont know who the hell Opal Wray is, but this was a very good poem i love the mood and the sadness u create.
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