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you just dont know
Contributed by
THEFORGOTTENSOUL
on
Tuesday, 16th December 2008 @ 10:56:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There is so much I want to share with you,
But my words are lost within me
I have so many emotions
How do I make you see
Life is not that simple
Hear this from my heart
Our love will concur all
As we stand here at the start.
Not speaking to you is killing me
You there and me here
But one day soon that will change
And I will finally have you near.
The Angels they did send you
The day that we met
Our love will last forever
As in concrete it is set
Come fly, fly with me baby
Oh come fly with me
We can explore our love together
And set our emotions free
For the skies are without limits
And the tree tops we sour too
Perched upon a branch
Our love is forever true
I never meant for this to happen
But I am sure glad it did
Hearing your love and laughter
Makes me feel like a kid
Please never doubt my love
What is shared between you and me
Cause I am here to hold you
You just wait and see
But for now, I have to be patient
And except our destiny
But I promise you this my darling
You are forever within me
one day we can be together
when that day comes it will be forever
baby i cant stand this pain that lies within
within the eyes of people that cant see the truth
Copyright ©
THEFORGOTTENSOUL
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2008-12-16 22:56:34]
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Re: you just dont know
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by Puppy on
Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 03:37:10 AM AEST
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this was so beautiful!! It made me feel alittle sad while reading it, I really hope things work out for you. well done!
Puppy :) |
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Re: you just dont know
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 12:39:57 PM AEST
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you use the same rhyme scheme as me, and you write in a similar style. i can appreciate this then, more than most. it is an excellent poem full of imagery and metaphor, very good indeed.
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