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For a time

Contributed by korax on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 06:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

First of all you rip me up
Stare into my face
Say I'm no good for my girl
That my love is a disgrace
You tear into me with your words
Slagging me up and down
Then you turn off your pc
Before you settle down

I am here and you are there
Thousands of miles apart
Yet I'm going to drag you to your knees
***** rip your heart apart
Distance is your only friend
Because this world is too small to hide
I want your last view on earth to be my fist
As it ploughs into your side

Nothings gonna save you
From the close near days of hell
I'm going to make you beg for mercy
I want to hear you scream and yell
For all the hurt and all the pain
That you caused us two
I'm going to show you the meaning of ***** pain
Its the only thing left to do

Day and day, night and night
You made my loved one cry
Thinking that I would not respond
"Victory" I hear you cry
I was always told by my mum
"Never ever raise a fist to a lady"
But you are nothing of the sort
Not here, not now, not maybe

To me your just a piece of *****
Whose going to watch your back
I'm going to take everything you had
I will not end my attack
I'll drag your corpse across the floor
And nail it to a post
Then I'll drink your blood
Raise my glass and "victory" I'll toast...

Copyright © korax ... [ 2003-03-21 18:25:00]
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Re: For a time (User Rating: 1 )
by theangelestdevil on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 07:48:56 PM AEST
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very very harsh poem. that person must have really hurt ur feelings for u to feel this angry but i like ur poem.

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