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listen to me whisper
Contributed by
treadingshallowfire
on
Monday, 15th December 2008 @ 07:43:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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sitting all alone with all this love to keep me sane
nowone here to share it with the pain is all the same
searching for a answer but no one can hear me scream
shadow,mist,light,and dust life aint what it seams
valleys of blood on my arms wait for the day
wounds of sorrow stain the dusk for death is on its way
love is nothing but a force meant to give us life
but love is only given once life is never twice
this is the last day that i live stricken in dismay
a burden left to big to handle a dragon left for you to tame
a burden left dismissed and raddled my deaths here for you to blame
a burden thats not worth the whispers gently driving you insane
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treadingshallowfire
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2008-12-15 19:43:19]
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Re: listen to me whisper
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by treadingshallowfire on
Monday, 15th December 2008 @ 07:54:42 PM AEST
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| hope you like this poem means alot to me so leave comments what you think doesnt matter if you want to tell me the truth or not |
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Re: listen to me whisper
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by THEFORGOTTENSOUL on
Saturday, 6th June 2009 @ 04:10:38 PM AEST
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I FEEL YOU IN THI POEM, I LIKE THE FEELING PUT INTO IT. I THINK THAT YOU CAN DEFINATLY WRITE, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
- THE FORGOTTENSOUL |
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