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My Pain

Contributed by avemaria on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



My Pain I hide so deep inside,
My morals, my feelings my pride.
With the pain I hide, I feel so ashamed.
But there is noone but myself to be blamed.
People that understand me are very few.
I have noone to turn to, I don't know what to do.
My pain is great that I can not bear.
Feelings like mine feel so rare.
The screams I let out no one can hear.
This great harmful pain I fear.
This pain is as silent as night.
A night that can cause such a fright.
Sometimes I listen to the dead silence of my pain.
I ask myself, What can I accomplish? What can I gain?
I wish someone could see the mask on my face.
I wish I could be happy with no disgrace.
Please uncover me, look deep in my mind.
Hidden feelings of lonliness you will find.
The way I am now, it's like a big show.
Everyone looks at me normally they would never know.
I wish someone could take my place for a day.
For these brave people I would pray.
I'm incognito, I'm so fake.
I'm nothing, just a big mistake.
As I kick to the surface, no one is there.
I try to pull myself up,as I gasp for air.
People watch me as I sit here and drown.
Always with a smile on my face, never a frown.
No one feels what I feel.
No one see's that it's real.
People can be so ignorant and blind.
They don't pay attention, they pay no mind.
I give up, I have nothing to prove, nothing to give.
The pain deep inside will forever live.




Copyright © avemaria ... [ 2003-03-21 18:05:00]
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Re: My Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 06:49:38 PM AEST
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((((ave))) im so sorry you feel this way, its sad...people are very ignorant and blind....just forget them...great write

Lindsey


Re: My Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by theangelestdevil on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 08:22:35 PM AEST
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i think i know wat u feelin cuz im feelin that too. people are blind and ignorant. i love ur poem cuz it relates to me. i like the way u rhymed the words.


Re: My Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 09:59:36 PM AEST
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very good write i have been there...believe in yourself ...and the rest of the world will fall into place
Sharon


Re: My Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by mblondiepink on Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 12:32:38 AM AEST
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i can relate too this.. great writtting keep up the great work..people say i know what u r feeling.. but they don't not untill they have been it that position..


Re: My Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Goebelclm73 on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 03:32:13 PM AEST
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I'm sorry that you have such deep feelings inside and you feel as though no one understands what you are going through. I've found in writing, it's a good way for me to release my pain, anger, hurt, suffering, inner fears etc...Keep writing, and just let it out!! Great write!!
Christopher




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