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In love with your mistakes

Contributed by kiba on Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 11:13:58 PM in AEST
Topic: obsession



I know what we are
We´ve come here so far
and now that this anti-christ
is a big star
of this deviled buissnes we wash off
our hands

I know that I scare you
Oh please dont pretend
The maximum feeling
of this life is death

I still see no colors
yet love the star light
for everything else
all I see all is black

I´d love you to suffer
for you wont come back
yet I will stroke your coffin
as it is on my back

Partiture writtings infesting my mind
I know that you see
and I still think you are blind
your fear of the shadows
and ambrace of light
what if you were wrong
and your evil was right

of all of my sins
I am proud of the seven
that´ll make me rule hell
and not serve in heaven

now that I notice
the glow in your eyes
I know that you sense it
that Im made of whispers
and live off their lies




Copyright © kiba ... [ 2008-12-14 23:13:58]
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Re: In love with your mistakes (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 15th December 2008 @ 12:31:01 AM AEST
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Kiba,
this is a deep and thought provoking write. I will go back and read it once more.

what if you were wrong
and your evil was right.....

Good stuff and killer poem.

Hugs
Michelle


Re: In love with your mistakes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th December 2008 @ 05:43:24 PM AEST
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a nice write with some wonderful imagery.

-phil




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