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Innocence Ends
Contributed by
Mars
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Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 05:25:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Innocence ends where compassion begins,
The guilty from the wilting,
like the fall leaves under a leather shoe.
And so summer ends.
We are no longer children.
Father left us to fend on our own.
Oh, was his trust ill spent.
Set adrift on an ocean of time.
Many things have changed,
and it scares me.
Torturing, is torture to me.
Why do I love it so?
I'm not a child anymore.
When we withhold forgiveness,
we only withhold ourselves.
From peace.
Tonight I feel the pain,
that I, myself inflicted.
I am sorry for the suffering,
sorry for the mindless crushing.
Please, forgive me.
Copyright ©
Mars
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2008-12-14 17:25:32]
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Re: Innocence Ends
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by spooky on
Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 07:49:56 PM AEST
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| i had ,,my parents divorced when i was 5yr old, my parents left me and my brother with other family members, i do knw what you feeling,,,i still have the scar,,everyone needs to be forgiven,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Innocence Ends
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by SilverRain on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 04:31:58 PM AEST
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| This is exceptional. I can't even begin to express how very much this piece moved me. Lovely write... |
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Re: Innocence Ends
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 06:54:13 PM AEST
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| This one is strong and well written. I honestly am not sure I get it all but nevertheless, I like it. It's definitely wrought with emotion. |
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