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Sunset
Contributed by
jnep
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Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 06:55:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Grey mornings await
By your bedside, Holding you
Endlessly, we wait...
Copyright ©
jnep
... [
2008-12-14 06:55:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sunset
(User Rating: 1 ) by jenniferstein2006 on
Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 07:50:52 AM AEST (User
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very short but worth reading! good job! |
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Re: Sunset
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mars on
Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 03:26:17 PM AEST (User
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Ok, who's browser froze up and hit refresh over and over =P. Now, for the poem, it's quite nice. Often my favorite poems are the most simple ones, that take something in life and give such a wonderful image using only a few words. Good job, look forward to futer writings =P. |
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