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Is it clear, the line in between?

Contributed by Arcadia1 on Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 11:10:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

When you go to lay in your sheets,
does your head race..
or are you at silent peace?

Does your arm reach over to hold their hand..
or do you like the way it falls into nothing like sand?

Who do you wish to feed your hunger,
do you know you don't need them any longer?
Will you ever look inside and see that your pain will subside?

How cold do you get?
Will you ever learn to accept it,
or will you always crave him as your only jacket?

Where does it all go,
Everything you thought you should know?
Do you bury it deep in the pockets of your heart
and try to form from a scattered start?

Or was it never there, just a way to occupy your time,
just to let her hand fall on the drop of a dime?

Did you ever find your home,
do you know its alright to be alone?

Can you find it inside,
the hunger that you cannot find?
Do you know you dont have to fight,
won't you remember that it followed you there every night?

Is it clear, the line between fact and fiction,
can you still feel the strength of its friction?

Copyright © Arcadia1 ... [ 2008-12-13 23:10:47]
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Re: Is it clear, the line in between? (User Rating: 1 )
by Ingredients on Sunday, 7th April 2013 @ 04:23:58 PM AEST
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I like that you used a lot of soft rhymes, very interesting, do you usually do that, or were you trying it out?

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