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Life's Metamorphosis
Contributed by
Anu
on
Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 10:50:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All my life i have been waiting for this day
To feel how love percolates in the veins..
At first I was bemused, unable to realise the change
Since, for me head and heart were all the same..!
Then you stepped into my prudently planned life,
Conjured my heart and made it alive..!
For me you appeared like Troy-the charming prince
Coup over my heart for you was the real winning..!
Days became bright and beautiful, like never before
Life metamorphosed from banal to colourful-to-the-core..!
Spinning my feet and dancing in the rains..
Humming some tunes I was waiting for you..!
Dont know how, then everything changed..
Living a planned life had changed the aims..!
Your love was panacea for all my pains..
why did you leave me alone with this complacent populace..!
Now I am getting insane, living with myself
Only thing i think is you and no one else..!
Seems like my body and mind have paralysed..
could you please help me cure this pain..??
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Anu
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2008-12-13 10:50:19]
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Re: Life's Metamorphosis
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by navydocny on
Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 11:06:38 AM AEST
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Very good poem....
Heartache explained.....
take care,
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Re: Life's Metamorphosis
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by venkat on
Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 05:20:08 AM AEST
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well written poem. well expressed feeling.
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Re: Life's Metamorphosis
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 06:39:23 PM AEST
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stunning write, absolutely stunning. it flows well and the content is marvellous. great work.
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