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Ire
Contributed by
navydocny
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Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 05:45:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Low is my head to profoundly pray
Obeisance splayed upon bended knee
To hear sweet words that love may say
To recover such beloved as thee
My longing ire’s against what’s naught
What slipped away my one precious gift
From tireless joy to laboriously fraught
Faith that one day my soul will be shrift
No other prayers, no other credence
There’s naught ever more tangible a fray
Than to fight dying love’s impedance
Finding again that most treasured cache
Not a day’s moment, not one moment given
Does the hope do not pass to finally be shriven
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navydocny
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2008-12-13 05:45:22]
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Re: Ire
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by karoody on
Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 04:13:09 PM AEST
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I love the language you picked for this write, Steve!
Your words flow to the heart beautifully and gracefully.
I am so glad to be back on here and reading again.
Can't wait for more!
Hugs Smiles and Blessings to you and yours always
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Re: Ire
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by shelby on
Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 05:36:55 PM AEST
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Steve,
good to see a post and be able to read it.
I love this style it is so fitting.
I hope you are doing well over there.
Hug From Texas
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Re: Ire
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 06:34:46 PM AEST
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you've used some fantastic words in this one. it is a fantastic poem actually, it is heartfelt, articulate and it flows very well. great work.
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