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he knocked upon your door
Contributed by
sidra
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Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 01:09:21 AM in AEST
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He knocked upon your door
You hesitated to answer
He patiently waited
Through he knew the burden of your cancer
A sweeter wine he brought for you to taste
He was silent solemon inevitable known no haste
He tenderly took your hand knowing your pain
He felt that belong to a kinder world for in your world you could no longer remain
You walked arm in arm ironically as lovers do he was compassionate an he was gentle he meant you no harm for was walking you to only with delight
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2008-12-13 01:09:21]
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Re: he knocked upon your door
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by shelby on
Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 02:00:01 AM AEST
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I am so sorry for your loss. You wrote a touching poem here.
Hugs and Blessings to you
Michelle |
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Re: he knocked upon your door
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by emystar on
Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 03:29:41 AM AEST
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This is beautifull even tho it's sad.
So sorry for your loss.
Keep writing, friend.
You have a great talent.
Peace, joy, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: he knocked upon your door
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by Loende on
Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 08:18:01 PM AEST
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This is such a beautiful and touching write. May you and your family find strength though your grief knowing that your step-father has no more pain. Thank you for posting it.
Be well,
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