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Crystal Teardrop
Contributed by
Mars
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Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 04:02:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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A crystal teardrop.
What has gone wrong my child?
Do not be afraid.
Copyright ©
Mars
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2008-12-12 16:02:47]
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Re: Crystal Teardrop
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 05:50:37 PM AEST
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This is one type of poetry I could never do. But I love to see read it and I liked this one
Great write
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: Crystal Teardrop
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by Loende on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 07:43:03 PM AEST
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I'm with Kelly. I can't seem to get the hang of haiku, but I enjoy reading it as well. Nice piece.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: Crystal Teardrop
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 06:10:39 PM AEST
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Very nice indeed. This would be something really cool to say to one's own child.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Crystal Teardrop
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by windowguy on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 02:09:26 AM AEST
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| Great title. |
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