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Dare to dream
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 01:14:58 AM in AEST
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Dare to dream the dream
that sets your heart to sail.
Pay no mind to ill wishers
tell them to go to hell.
How dare another person
stomp upon another;s dreams?
How dare another person
think their moments are all that matter.
Dare to dance in the rain.
Feel the wet upon bare feet.
Dare to dream at night
Dare to dream in daylights bright gleam.
Shame on the person
who belittles those around.
Always a remark
waking with a frown.
You are the ones
who let the day pass by.
With rude remark and never a dream
the loss is yours..
Not mine
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-12-12 01:14:58]
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Re: Dare to dream
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by emystar on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 03:18:20 AM AEST
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Yo go shel,
You got it going is this wise write.
Awesome work.
Wuvs ya, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Dare to dream
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by snoopington on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 06:53:53 AM AEST
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yeah well done great write noone should ever put anyone elses dreams down we all have to dream for somethin,
really really great write,
all the best........
m........... |
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Re: Dare to dream
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 08:23:55 AM AEST
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i like the passion you have showed in this one, very impressive. the message you are conveying is a good one, people shouldn't put others down, they should put their own house in order. good stuff.
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Re: Dare to dream
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by Mars on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 04:18:55 PM AEST
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| There is a lot of heart in this... it's quite insperational. It is so very true; Why waist time beating me down while you could stand up? Very nice. |
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Re: Dare to dream
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 05:00:29 PM AEST
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Your words echo what I have said on my profile
"It never hurts to dream a little".
You are so right with what you say here.
Good work
Steve |
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Re: Dare to dream
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by Loende on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 07:49:50 PM AEST
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Ahhh....the loss is indeed theirs. This is a very strong write with lessons aplenty. Words that should be said. Great job.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: Dare to dream
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by venkat on
Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 03:36:41 AM AEST
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Aww..very good write..
none have a right to belittle yourdreams. only those who never dream will be passing rude remarks.
love n hugs my friend..
venkat
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