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A Young Man Walks Down The Road
Contributed by
Mars
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Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 03:13:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A young man walks, down the road,
a uniform, to his abode.
The gun he holds, is a machine,
within, the power, to crush a dream.
From his cape, a killer's sight,
he finds his prey, within the night.
A child, with his mothers arm,
who would soon, come to harm.
He, was once a boy himself,
anger with his blasted wealth.
But he is drowned in what he is.
Detached, from the world this is.
He is but a precious host,
to whom he was, a former ghost.
And now we hear a mothers cry,
but more than a mother and child will die.
The basic unit, of what all is,
the mother, father, and child that was his.
What is now a family broken,
Revenge has paid its dreadful token.
Copyright ©
Mars
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2008-12-11 15:13:22]
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Re: A Young Man Walks Down The Road
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 04:34:25 PM AEST
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| very very dark, but it had a good structure to it, a good poem. |
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Re: A Young Man Walks Down The Road
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by lidachur on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 06:32:46 PM AEST
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| This poem has a ring to it. I really enjoy poetry like this. Keep writing. |
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