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DREAMING OF DIALOGUE AND MODERN LOVE

Contributed by RitalinKid on Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 11:18:29 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

" Indeed I catch your drift. I hear ya man. I totally agree. That's what I think.
I know what you mean. Yeah....Sure....I guess so....I don't know Miss. That sounds very dirty. Am I that capable shotgun? There! On your mantle next to the ashes and those unwrapped Communist photographs. You know what? I will crack your eyes open wide."

And she, so sad, I invite.

" I know. I know. Please do not be afraid. It will be great.............
She has definitely been here before and she smells like a campfire. I totally know what you mean."

And knowing the outcome, I shave my skin alone.
Naked, innocent in stark repose.

" Open the one on the left " she whispered.
And knowing the outcome, A sense of smell in Technicolor.
She suggested I cease my heavy breathing. And I spiked her straight.
A silver crucifix and she bled solid: Inconsistent but chronic nonetheless.

I know what you think. I think you may be passing on.

That incessant rhythmic wailing.
The banshee splitting the cold October morning.
My wife eyed me with confident disdain
And handed me a cup of instant coffee.
She forgot about smiling for now.
I watch her dress and bless the trinity across her chest
With cheap perfume.

Beauty is so painful these days.

Copyright © RitalinKid ... [ 2008-12-11 11:18:29]
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Re: DREAMING OF DIALOGUE AND MODERN LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 04:15:30 PM AEST
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you have an extraordinary imagination, out of this world. the final stanza is superb, good job.

-phil

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