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Trapped
Contributed by
Benjina
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Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 04:15:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You have no affection
You're lacking perfection
Your toxic lips and your devilish eyes
You're every persons perfect demise
I see through the pain
You're shallow and vain
You're worthless and corrupt
Any mercy, abrupt
And I'm trapped by your embrace
Forced to see you're ugly face
Infecting like a disease
Can I ever be at ease?
I refuse be confined
Because I am refined
I am breaking your possesion
I am feeling regression
I am fighting your obscurity
With my hearts own purity
And I've escaped your gore
For I am trapped, no more
Copyright ©
Benjina
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2008-12-11 04:15:05]
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Re: Trapped
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 07:33:37 AM AEST
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i like poems that flow well, and this one flowed perfectly. i loved this bit:
Your toxic lips and your devilish eyes
You're every persons perfect demise
good imagery and it just seems to work, if that makes sense. the whole poem was a delight to read, well done.
-phil |
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Re: Trapped
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by Mars on
Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 03:34:59 PM AEST
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| Wonderful images this poem creates, leaving just enough room for interpretation for us to make it our own. It flows very nicely. |
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