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Dog
Contributed by
Yovi
on
Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 01:33:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
PetPoems
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As sunlight leaps through open windows
And Dust glitters, sparkles
His moist nose twitches
As flowers greet the dawn and spread their wings
Flying, but never leaving the ground
One sleep encrusted eye opens
As mail is delivered from a blue-suited gent
Newspaper flopped onto stained wood
The beast is awakened
And sneaks up to his prey
He waits then POUNCES
As paper rain drenches down in torrents,
Flooding the lawn
He exuberates joy
Then RETREATS
Into the sanctity of His den
While the remains of his prey coat
the ground in a blanket of articles and advertisements
Copyright ©
Yovi
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2008-12-11 01:33:00]
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Re: Dog
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 08:03:37 AM AEST
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quite funny really, although not for the postman lol an enjoyable read.
-phil |
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Re: Dog
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by Mars on
Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 03:38:33 PM AEST
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| Yes, it sharply changes from being all solemn to a very humorous undertone. Thanks for sharing it =). |
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Re: Dog
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by thumper on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 01:38:21 AM AEST
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Very funny! Got a good laugh outta this one. :o} Great Hunter! lol I've got one like that, only she likes paper towel tooters. Very entertaining read. Kudos!!
Thumpers ;o) |
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Re: Dog
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by Jlokitty on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 10:25:28 PM AEST
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| aww hahaha! |
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Re: Dog
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by vickil84 on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 07:45:16 AM AEST
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| I like this. Made me smile. Nice work x |
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