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- The First Time -
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143
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Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 08:42:02 PM in AEST
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The first time I saw you
then I realized
your long black hair
and them beautiful eyes
As I notice your style
and the expressions on your face
It captured my vision
while sitting in your place
Almost everyday I see you
but until then
I worked all day long
to come visit you again
I dont know what it is
that you possess inside
maybe its your smile
or your arms open so wide
What amazes me the most
is when I walk in
watching you look my way
as I wave hello again
So may you know
please hear this true
your so wonderful
in everything you do
And just for that
heres what Ill do
pray my hands together
and continue on with you
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2008-12-10 20:42:02]
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Re: - The First Time -
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by Mars on
Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 09:05:01 PM AEST
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| I like the first stanza, them is actually a better word than those as I see it in this instance =). Otherwise, it's a nice poem =P. |
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Re: - The First Time -
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 08:23:55 AM AEST
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a nice, pleasant love poem. one filled with positivity and subtle emotion. it made me smile, so thanks for that.
-phil |
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