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A Year And Forty One Ago . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 04:49:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A
year
and forty one ago
while drifting in my
youth,
life
imparted in my soul
the meaning of it's
thruth.
It
all began amidst a life
of such imperfect schemes,
that lovely lady now my wife
solidified
my
dreams.
Where
an angel comes from
quite frankly i know not,
yet honestly i say
to
thee
an
angel's what i've
got.
A
stranger
from beyond somewhere
chose to be my girl,
she gave to me
loves special key
that would unlock
her
world.
With her presence
she would grace
slowly over time,
that part of me
known as her place
where poets write there
rhyme.
But
more than poems
we came to write
no words would we
reherse,
two lovers kissed
within the night
and wrote
the perfect
verse.
A
year and forty one ago
i met my destiny,
someone i didn't even know
gave
me,
eternity.
Ben
myheartsvoice
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Re: A Year And Forty One Ago . . . Ben
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by Mars on
Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 04:58:02 PM AEST
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| Wow, this poem shows much devotion and emotion, and how some things I suppose, just can't be shown in words, but we still try =). Wonderful write, good job. |
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Re: A Year And Forty One Ago . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 05:30:33 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem dedicated to your beloved. but the next poem you write, be a little more careful in your proofreading. but Great poem! |
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Re: A Year And Forty One Ago . . . Ben
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by fanniesson on
Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 04:54:15 PM AEST
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I feel like a voyeur reading this
great piece here
I’d show it to the wife but then
she’d expect me to write one
with her as my inspiration (LOL) |
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Re: A Year And Forty One Ago . . . Ben
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by thebadguy9999 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 04:04:56 PM AEST
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| nice |
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