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Don’t Cry
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 04:16:52 PM in AEST
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You are without passion
Steadily walking on stilts
A balancing act to keep up hope
The outcome of the scenario
Plays itself out on this tight-rope
Strangling the prospects of fame
The actor of fortune
The writer, The lover
Reinvented the game
Set this whole production
Right up in a ball of flame
Without ever getting caught
Never giving up his name
There is nothing left to fear,
No reason left to cry
There is a voice in your ear,
Telling you its your time to die
There is an ache in your stomach
As you kneel over and close your eyes
There comes a time
When the question
Is answered simply with no reply
________
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jyssvw22
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2008-12-10 16:16:52]
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Re: Don’t Cry
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by Mars on
Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 05:05:29 PM AEST
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| Although I normally not a fan of this style of poetry, this one caught my eye. I really like the ending. Sometimes nothing, just silence, can say much more than any words could, but you show that to us on paper =) (err, html...). I though it was going to be a sad poem at first, but it's really full of an odd combination of longing, sorrow, and hope. Well, that's how I feel, not that that's a bad thing =P. Good job. |
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Re: Don’t Cry
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 05:34:19 PM AEST
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| Whoaa.. This is a deep poem. Awesome job! |
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Re: Don’t Cry
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 08:31:04 AM AEST
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dark, with some Intriguing imagery. good write.
-phil |
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Re: Don’t Cry
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 3rd November 2014 @ 12:47:55 PM AEST
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Intriguing. Lots of layers, like peeling an onion. I have noticed this was the beginning of a rocky time for you. I am happy you found your way back.
~Scorp
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