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A Cold Night
Contributed by
rad89
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Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 05:53:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It was a cold night!
Not cold as the winter,
Just cold on me.
What was I thinking,
went out with my soul leaking.
Not a tear sheds,
yet I can’t say a word.
Was it necessary to find out twice,
just how much it hurts?
You stood there,
a beautiful dream,
embodied in perfection.
Or was it just me?
Guess I just got caught up in your charm,
another victim of deception,
Another hole in my soul,
Did it move you at all?
And I will be waiting on my dream,
It’s now to late to fix it or to cover my scars,
Unfair would not fit this scheme,
In your eyes I saw stars.
I won’t see them anymore.
Never knew a broken hearth,
Could break once more.
Another chapter closed,
But with the wrong epilogue.
My heart still burns as this twisted world turns!
Copyright ©
rad89
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2008-12-10 05:53:24]
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Re: A Cold Night
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 08:45:43 AM AEST
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the flow of this poem is superb. great work.
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Re: A Cold Night
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by Puppy on
Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 03:44:14 AM AEST
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i really liked..it was beautiful..well done!
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