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Holy Temptation
Contributed by
wazarov
on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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rise and look at me in the eyes
you bow to your hero or your pharao
but i can smell your sorrow
how wrong you were
and how long you can dare
i`m just proud for bringing you this cloud
that might feeds your appetite
but i tell you
i`m probably worse than you
cause i`m sick and tired of prayers
sick and tired of being tempted
temted every where
temted in the air,tempted out of the sphere
the word to me becomes a nightmare
i`m willing to give up my right
to be in this existence
made of violence
corrupted by silence
honestly i feel weak,am i freak
who can answer..
Copyright ©
wazarov
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2003-03-21 14:35:00]
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Re: Holy Temptation
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by karoody on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 04:25:23 AM AEST
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| a very strong message. well said, my friend. |
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Re: Holy Temptation
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by wazarov on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 03:41:02 PM AEST
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| i thank u from the bottom of my heart, really, every word in my poetry is true and straight from reality,my reality i just desperatly try to share my human pain with the world thanks again my friend |
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Re: Holy Temptation
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by PhantomsLDY on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 01:12:41 PM AEST
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| I can answer!!! You allow yourself to feel cut off from the world hence you feel weak. Your words are strong and willful use them against the oppression. |
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Re: Holy Temptation
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by AngryPrincess on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 12:08:04 AM AEST
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another great write
Lindsey |
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