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Passing You By
Contributed by
Samsgurl16
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Monday, 8th December 2008 @ 03:27:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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if love is life then mine is done
because instead i had funn
i continued to be a friend
and live life to no end
instead of looking for love
as i should
i played games
and followed the hood
i got into trouble
each step of the way
it was me and my double
MS LEEANN STAINS
we were best friends
that had lots of funn
and because of that
our love life is done
well never be loved
because of the bad
and its all because
the guys made us mad
so once again i say
just what was said before
but please please stay
and do not ignore
if you party hardy
and put aside no time
love will definatly
be the one that passes you by
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Samsgurl16
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2008-12-08 15:27:39]
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Re: Passing You By
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by snoopington on
Tuesday, 9th December 2008 @ 04:57:39 AM AEST
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well done another good write,
good flow.........
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Re: Passing You By
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th December 2008 @ 05:35:02 PM AEST
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i like the message behind this, a very interesting poem.
-phil |
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