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Lost in Violence and Hate

Contributed by babeeGii on Monday, 8th December 2008 @ 02:53:07 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

When I take your hand, Will you take me far away?
Please. Away from all the problems in the world. Just you and me. Sky high. No one can stop us. They can't catch us. You're my only addiction. My first in everything. When we're together, we're just on top. We're 100 feet high.
Just you and me. Never leave me. Regret nothing cuz tomorrow's just another day to make it through. Forget yesterday. No time for memories.
It's hard. You and I. We're so perfect. But we're stuck surrounded by violence and hate. In the hood we live. Hard to believe we'll always be together. Sky high we once used to be. On top where we lived until that day you tripped and fell into eternal flame. Gone and lost. Used to think the love I had for you would be eternal. Lost in violence. Filled with hate. I forgot. Can only hope the day I leave, I'm welcome by Him. It's hard to believe that you can live through hell twice. The day I hit the grave, courage I kept in my heart. But a voice I once loved to hear led me to an eternal torment. I forgot me. but I was gone.

Copyright © babeeGii ... [ 2008-12-08 14:53:07]
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Re: Lost in Violence and Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by Devilish1 on Monday, 29th April 2013 @ 11:49:04 AM AEST
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Aweee i definitely know this feeling.. hello there you.. it will get better. and to release these feelings and the pain in your words makes you beautiful.

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