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Into Your Life
Contributed by
Eireannach
on
Monday, 8th December 2008 @ 09:14:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Helplessly, hopelessly
Into your eyes
My soul keeps falling closer to you
Until I am lost in your emerald hue
In all that I find while I linger there
Is a love and a spirit unfettered by care
Shamelessly, blamelessly
Into your arms
Where we blend as one, no longer as two
A love that is timeless, patient and true
Is strengthened alone by your elegant grace
A passion renewed while beholding your face
Breathlessly, endlessly
Into your heart
Where I am forever longing to be
Embracing you ever closer to me
Where I know that I could face any trial
Be it sun after sun or mile after mile
© 2001 O’ Raithbheartaigh
Copyright ©
Eireannach
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2008-12-08 09:14:12]
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Re: Into Your Life
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by tswilkins on
Monday, 8th December 2008 @ 10:26:41 AM AEST
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| Very beautifully, creatively, and elegantly written. I like the breaks in between the four line stanzas. That is very unique. I also like the flow and the meaning of the overall poem. The last stanza is my favorite. Beautiful. |
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Re: Into Your Life
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th December 2008 @ 04:49:29 PM AEST
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very good and beautiful as ever. well done.
-phil |
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Re: Into Your Life
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by Loende on
Monday, 8th December 2008 @ 05:22:24 PM AEST
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*sigh* This is so lovely. So full of a powerful love. It left me sighing and smiling. I especially liked the lines:
"Breathlessly, endlessly
Into your heart"
This is a wonderful, elegant piece. Thank you so much for posting it.
Be well,
Loende
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Re: Into Your Life
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by Mars on
Monday, 8th December 2008 @ 10:30:15 PM AEST
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| Good write, very beautiful. I love your word choice. |
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