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The Lovers Hope
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Saturday, 6th December 2008 @ 03:43:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Everyday seems to be a routine
I am tired and weary
Wishing somehow
At the end of the day
I can have a hand to hold on to
I can have a shoulder to rest on to
Every night I look upon the sky
To the stars above
Praying somehow
You could sense the love
I am sending to make you feel safe
I am sending to make you feel happy
Somehow destiny keeps us apart
This heart is still missing
A piece of puzzle
That will complete us
A fairytale ending for us
Enchanted finally for the rest of our lives
When I found your smile (When I have your love)
Copyright ©
funnyface09
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2008-12-06 03:43:25]
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Re: The Lovers Hope
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by PreciousKitten on
Saturday, 6th December 2008 @ 03:47:52 PM AEST
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i like this one. i understand your hope.
i hope you get what you are talking about.
good writing =) |
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Re: The Lovers Hope
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th December 2008 @ 05:54:02 PM AEST
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a very touching, passionate love poem. good job.
-phil |
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Re: The Lovers Hope
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by Butterflyperfect on
Sunday, 7th December 2008 @ 01:43:05 AM AEST
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I know what it is like to hope for something to happen, its not always easy. But at the end of the day you find you have made it through and that is in the end all you really need. I hope you find the happiness that you seek. Keep writing this is a nice write.
-Butterfly |
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Re: The Lovers Hope
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by snoopington on
Sunday, 7th December 2008 @ 02:46:28 PM AEST
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really liked this alot of emotion
all the best........
m............ |
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Re: The Lovers Hope
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by Mars on
Monday, 8th December 2008 @ 10:27:12 PM AEST
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A very nice, longing poem. I can feel your desire for something, unnamed, but something, or someone...
Anyway, great poem, I hope you find what your looking for someday. |
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