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how to end it
Contributed by
lostforgood
on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Take that knife and cut it deep,
Let that blood start to seep....
Take them pills; 2 a time,
Let them take you off your feet...
Take that gun and hold it high,
Let it blow you to the sky....
Copyright ©
lostforgood
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2003-03-21 13:05:00]
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Re: how to end it
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 01:25:41 PM AEST
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| very very expressive...I liked it....my username is chicken, but I am not signed in at the moment. |
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Re: how to end it
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by springchic1979 on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 01:33:26 PM AEST
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Wonderfully morbid. I loved it!
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Re: how to end it
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by juliette on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:13:46 PM AEST
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Okay, now you're worrying me! Refer to my prior comment. It's not worth it if this is something you seriously consider. And if you need someone to talk to email me or send a private message, okay?
juliette |
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Re: how to end it
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by theangelestdevil on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 08:42:11 PM AEST
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| i commented on ur other poem "a suicide note" i think it was. u should listen to juliatte she also commented on the other poem. |
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Re: how to end it
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by TundraHydra on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 09:58:51 PM AEST
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| This sent shivers through me, I've thought of this too often great write |
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