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The Way The Story Goes.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Thursday, 4th December 2008 @ 08:49:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I love you
And you hate me
Proven by our history
You laugh
I cry
You Live
I die
And that's the way our story goes
The bitter end
Lost love
Lost friend
Pluck my broken wings
As I descend
Hit the ground
Without a sound
Watch me stumble
Shatter and crumble
My broken heart keeps me humble
And I cry
Yes I cry
Mourn the loss of you and I
Fully aware
That you don't care
I'm here
You're there
The rest is just air
Deep breaths of fresh despair
And I get no rest
It's hard to relax with a knife in my chest
A personal gift from you
A mark you can't undo
But in your eyes it's all okay
I never mattered anyway
So just keep thinking you're right
And I'm wrong
I'm weak
Your strong
Blah blah blah
And so on and so on
Because what's the point?
You're already gone.
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bleedthelove
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2008-12-04 20:49:50]
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Re: The Way The Story Goes.
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by eternalsunshine on
Thursday, 4th December 2008 @ 09:37:46 PM AEST
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Great flow of words, and story you described...
I feel your pain, i was and still am in a similar situation that keeps lingering on..
Peace&Love
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Re: The Way The Story Goes.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 10:47:06 AM AEST
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the purity in the flow of this poem is unbelievable, it is so easy and enjoyable to read. you would never have guessed it was about such a sad subject. excellent.
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