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Destination Sorrow.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 08:00:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Broken dreams
Stagnant energy
Sick to death by the love within me
Please skin me alive
Peel me away from this pain so I can survive
Running blind
Stitched up eyes
Murdered by truth inside a world of lies
A shattered past
Like broken glass
Cut my heart from my chest so I can rest
Bury the emotions that I have confessed
Anything and everything
To run away
To fall astray
Razorblades to help me bleed it away
I have a million thoughts but nothing to say
I've been silent for so long my mouth is rusted shut with decay
So I weep instead
I am the crying dead
Held up by only the gun to my head
You may as well drive stakes through my hands
Because I'm hanging on every word you said
Alone in the silence
Numb to the violence
They say nothing lasts forever
But that is untrue
I'm so sick of being in love with you
After all these years
After all these tears
Look at where it got me
Nothing but a broken heart
You should have just pointed a gun to my chest and shot me
Instead you just up and forgot me
Which leaves me here
Drowning in the sorrow
Waiting to disappear.
Copyright ©
bleedthelove
... [
2008-12-03 20:00:29]
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Re: Destination Sorrow.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 10:16:05 AM AEST
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this is an excellent poem, full of different images. it also has a interesting, regretful tone. the rhyme scheme is very good and allows it to flow very well. good write.
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Re: Destination Sorrow.
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 01:14:48 PM AEST
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there is a heavy sense of frustration in this piece, the pain is overwhelming even as a mere reader of this poem. very very nicely written poem this is.
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