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my special place
Contributed by
lostforgood
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Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I dream of a pretty place
Far away that holds my gaze
This certain place will be for me
Where time can freeze and I’ll be free
It will have a warm crisp breeze
And perhaps even some little trees.
There will be a great big valley
That’s lush and green
And stretches farther than my eyes allow me
There will be a tiny stream
That is crystal clear and slightly chilled
The clear blue sky
Will hang real high
And there will be a constant rain
Cleansing the land of all impurities
The air will be new with a fresh sweet scent
Filling me up with good things meant
And when night falls the moon will shimmer
The stars will sparkle
And shadows will dance
And amongst this all, I will sit
Smiling brightly and very content
In this place I will not know
All those horrid lonely lows
In this place everything will be right
And I will be kept in the light
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lostforgood
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2003-03-21 11:35:00]
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Re: my special place
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 11:58:46 AM AEST
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I have a magical place to. It is very reassuring isn't it!! A beautiful poem elegantly written.
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Re: my special place
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 01:35:28 PM AEST
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I just wrote about my quiet place... it's great to have somewhere to escape.
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Re: my special place
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by juliette on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:16:50 PM AEST
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It's me again - I like this one - I can see your special place so clearly in my head.
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