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Verbalize
Contributed by
Cathi
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Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 03:05:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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See me as I am
Count the holes in my aura
Refresh my tired torture
Embrace the livid encounter
Account for your sin and your magic
Manufacture for me beautiful loneliness
Copyright ©
Cathi
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2008-12-03 03:05:13]
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Re: Verbalize
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 03:12:27 AM AEST
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WOW this brought back memories. Geezzzzzz.
You captured such emotion in this write within a few words. I feel ya, deeply.
I am also glad that you got away. The hard part will be now not to cave and go back. Hang tuff and you will be just fine.
Bless ya
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Re: Verbalize
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 04:35:07 PM AEST
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very good, the second line is a stunner.
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Re: Verbalize
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 05:36:47 PM AEST
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I have to agree one the second line.......one of those lines in a poem that will stick in my mind for a very long time to come.
Short and bitter yet nothing wasted
Steve |
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