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I hold you dear. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 06:03:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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softly, I slide up to meet you. . .
my skin upon your skin.
my tongue easily lingers
where ever it finds itself.
I cannot tell my favorite spot
so I'll kiss you everywhere. . .
so tender as we're touching,
I am shaking, I am so aware
that my fingertips are tingling now
from tracing your sweet skin. . .
I want that sweet. . . sensation.
be sure, I hold you dear.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2008-12-02 18:03:09]
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Re: I hold you dear. . .
(User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 05:19:49 AM AEST
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Just lovely. Erotic, passionate, tactile; and vibrant. An instrument is being played, yet the resonance affects the lover as much as the loved (we must assume the latter), as well as this reader.
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Re: I hold you dear. . .
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 04:15:09 PM AEST
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very sensual and erotic, wonderfully descriptive and passionate.
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Re: I hold you dear. . .
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by PreciousKitten on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 05:06:40 PM AEST
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| im in love with this poem. this has really made my day. love it. |
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