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wait for me
Contributed by
treadingshallowfire
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Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 03:25:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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a seed of love thats nurtured gets stronger as it grows
a love thats unattended will wither like a rose
time will spoil everything but steady as it flows
can a love hide forever heaven only knows
a thousand days a thousand nights
a thousand rain drops from my eyes
stare at heaven as i cry
will she wait for me
a hundred nights i lay asleep
searching for you in my dreams
a hundred days i then awake
just to search another day
hold on babe im on my way
we were meant to be
a million stars in the sky
a million seeds needing earth
another million reasons why
my dreams lead me to her
shadows gloom has reached its peak
im loser her i can not sleep
without her love i cannot breathe
dont give up on me
however long this may take
an endless love is on its way
ill see you when where both awake
lying next to me
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Re: wait for me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 08:18:31 AM AEST
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| it has a nice lyrical quality to it, you have got the rhyme just right. keep it up! |
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Re: wait for me
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 12:47:27 AM AEST
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I agree with Phill it is very lyrical and pretty I love it.
A million stars a million seeds.........(nice)
Entire write is simply beautiful.
Welcome to YPDC
Michelle |
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Re: wait for me
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by Puppy on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 03:47:30 AM AEST
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that was an amazing poem! it was so beautiful.... well done....
Puppy :) |
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