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Just For You xXx
Contributed by
kingdomSon
on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 07:55:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The moment i met you
my soul lifted
feeling like
i dreamnt you into existance
i thank the creator of us all
for bringing you to me
im so truly thankfull
i feel so gifted
i want to wake up and see you there
and for you to know i will always be there
come or go rain or shine
i already know
that some things in life just take time
i want to sleep with you by my side
i want us to be comfortable
without the feeling to hide
i want you to know exactly how i feel
i want to tell you
and for you to know
that i am real
love you L. ;-) xXx
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kingdomSon
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2008-12-01 19:55:48]
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Re: Just For You xXx
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 12:23:32 AM AEST
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A very sweet and sentimental work here. Letting someone know you are real (not just physically but what your heart speaks) is exactly what poetry is all about. Good job.
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Re: Just For You xXx
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 08:32:42 AM AEST
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a good poem. i particularly like this bit:
feeling like
i dreamnt you into existance
that is a wonderful bit of imagery, well done. |
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