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like i said before baby, it looks great on you

Contributed by Shattered_soul on Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 12:39:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I hate myself for this right now.
Looking away as I quiver beneath her trying so hard to stop myself from crying.
just let her stumble over her words.

"Im so sorry."
"I cant believe im doing this to you."

They always leave.

Cry yourself to sleep again?
really...
Its kind of pathetic.
night after night'
month after month.
dont be a little ***** about this.
if she wanted you back she would have cheated on her ***** right now.

Wow...
A day and a night
since shes crossed your mind?
A smile to your lips..

a smile to your lips....

a smile to your lips!

How great does this feel?
how great does she feel there in your mind?
all day long..
as you dream at night!

how crazy you are right now..
thinking about her
and again...
a smile to your lips.

Oh dear sweet wife.
I want nothing more then to be there where you are.
to stumble over my words,
blushing as I do so.
(because you know I will)
Im so scared
You'll make me fall on my face,
say something stupid.
I am so scared
to take your hand.
to meet your eyes..
to feel your lips!

OMG Im so excited!!!

Finding someone worth hours of typing.
sitting and typing...
day after day.
my brother hates me!
but I think its worth it...

I would love to see your love struck smile fall across your lips as I type to you at work.
When you log on and see that I've left you a message.
when you see that im online.

While you read my message you cant help but smile,
because of something simple ive said, even though I dont even realize that I probably say it every day you do! I dont even realize 1/2 the things I say that make you smile, I know you dont tell me 1/2 of it in fear of feeling foolish.
You always let that smile creep upon your cheeks
but like I've said before baby..

Keep it there
It looks great on you!

Copyright © Shattered_soul ... [ 2008-12-01 12:39:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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