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Riddle Poem
Contributed by
Samsgurl16
on
Sunday, 30th November 2008 @ 10:31:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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the darkness all around
no light to be seen
as he creeps upon the ground
not unclean
but not the good guy
hes hated by all
by all hes dispised
he has no friends
nor love in his eyes
until one day
there came a suprize
he was creeping along
like a thing in nite
when he came upon
a girl with a fright
he said to her dont be afraid
because ill tell you now
there is no escape
but she moved in and looked in his eyes
and was not afraid
though she didnt know why
she liked his hair eyes and cold skin
she knew she would probably die
but she didnt know when
he looked at her as if only a meal
but she saw in his eyes
that he wasnt for real
he picked her up and carried her away
and she still wasnt scared
on this very odd day
as they arrived at the spot which hed picked
he saw tears in her eyes
though she would not admit
he was not hated by all
at least not by her
he had begun to fall
for her likeness and curves
so he then took a bite
and made her one of him
they canvase the night
to now from back then
more ppl died
the more that they sined
but love was right there
with both of them
though they killed killed and killed
from begginig to end
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Re: Riddle Poem
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 01:31:15 AM AEST
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is it that new vampyre movie twilight?
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Riddle Poem
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 12:23:03 PM AEST
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| About a badger?! |
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Re: Riddle Poem
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by snoopington on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 10:15:08 AM AEST
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i think it could have a few meanings tho really like the flow great write.
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Re: Riddle Poem
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by Samsgurl16 on
Sunday, 7th December 2008 @ 10:27:26 AM AEST
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| it is not about a movie it is about a story caracter! |
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