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An Ideal Winter
Contributed by
Orpheus
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Sunday, 30th November 2008 @ 04:18:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I am one who is coming to
His senses as he watches you
Standing in the snow
Smiling, for you know
I love you.
You are one who carefully
Thinks of all we've come to be--
Playing in the snow,
Laughing, for you know
You love me.
We are those who have no past--
Lovers, who've found life so vast,
Walking in the snow
silently; we know
Love will last.
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Orpheus
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2008-11-30 16:18:29]
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Re: An Ideal Winter
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by Aryo on
Sunday, 30th November 2008 @ 04:44:59 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, I love the rhyming and the diverse point of view about love. It's very simple and happy. Good work. |
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Re: An Ideal Winter
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by navydocny on
Sunday, 30th November 2008 @ 06:54:58 PM AEST
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I like this because its hopeful....
It has a new and youthful outlook and I think that its very nice...
Great job!
Steve |
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Re: An Ideal Winter
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 12:04:38 AM AEST
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truly sweetly beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: An Ideal Winter
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by Orpheus on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 06:00:22 PM AEST
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| It is supposed to say it was inspired by the first verse of Winter Wonderland, but apparently something is wrong with using quotation marks. |
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