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Snow White, Blood Red
Contributed by
jcvamp
on
Sunday, 30th November 2008 @ 02:48:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Wrist slit open, like a rose bursts from its bud
Blood trickles, like dew from her crimson lips
Her breathing slows into an eternal dream
Laid to rest in her glass coffin
A timeless beauty for the ages
The deceit of fairytales.
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jcvamp
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2008-11-30 14:48:15]
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Re: Snow White, Blood Red
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by Aryo on
Sunday, 30th November 2008 @ 04:07:53 PM AEST
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| good use of words, but disturbing context. It's gothic/emo. |
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Re: Snow White, Blood Red
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by Lilymaemax on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 10:14:31 AM AEST
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| I dont know how I feel reading this.Beautifully put together yet it is extremely disturbing.Disturbingly enjoyable.Lilymae |
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